caustic words and primitive art

I propose again

I propose

you dispose

you shoot me cold hearted

I collect all bows

I try to build again and again

this all process makes me a man

for you dispose again

die hard, i propose again


© Hemindur J

22 responses to “I propose again”

  1. Thanks for sharing. Initially the imagery causes femininity to hold sway as she proposes but as the bows pierce flesh; the proposals and the rendering of blood transforms the journey into a male experience which leaves us at the end with a proposal to consider, again, AND again. Love IT! I also love the simplicity of your word construction. I do.

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